drug of yours...
There...in the air,
I can see the smoke,
smoke, of your promises,
that now diffuses,
here... in my eyes,
is a flood of tears,
tears, of blood
that now crawl down my cheek,
there...in my memories,
I can sense a love,
love, dressed in scarlet,
that now fades away,
here...in my chest,
is a heart,
a heart, of wax,
that now burns,
there...in your talks,
was a magic,
a magic, mesmerizing me,
that only took me in,
here...in my skull,
is a brain,
a brain, smart enough,
that now freaks out,
ohh...in my blood,
runs the drug,
drug, of yours,
that now poisons my soul,
ohh...in your arms,
I want to die,
die, with peace,
this was once my wish...!
here i sit, reading your post
ReplyDeletesurprised to see an astounding work
work that contains a story of love
that has been shattered into pieces by love.
OMG, i am the first follower....awesome...
ur work deserves much more, it was so awesome reading the poem, every word, every sentence complete in its self..
just keep writing i will keep on stalking u. :D
such a motivating comment..! :D glad 2 have u as my follower.. thanks for appreciating my work.. :)sure, keep stalking... :D
ReplyDelete@umna..:D...ala krdia behen jee nai!:DDDD
ReplyDelete@ateeq...em sure you r gonna be tempted to keep on following her...afterawl she and i are from the same party:P
@roghay...thanks dear.. :DD honor for me that such great bloggers following me.. ;)
ReplyDeleteWow Umna! This is simply wonderful! So passionate! :D'
ReplyDeleteThank you hafsa! :D
ReplyDeleteOMG, really?????
ReplyDeletematlab now i will have 2 gehri gehri posts to read,
that's height of awesomeness.
:D