Monday, 29 August 2011

gloom...nothing to bloom


Gloom, nothing to bloom,when mind so tensed,

when grudges so intense,



Depression,only aggression ,when it's so hard to breathe,

when frustration seethe,


Despair,nothing to repair,when dreams smashed,

when inner voice bashed,


Fright,nothing so bright,when hopes fell,

when thoughts pell-mell


Oh autumn of my heart, depart,let's get apart,let in the spring,

with a new swing,

chanted by at

6 comments:

  1. ateeq mughal29 August 2011 at 16:13

    oh autumn of my heart, depart, lets get apart,let in the spring
    with a new swing


    u r good with rhymes,
    u r good with words,
    u add stuff like never read before,
    ur stuff glows bright with emotions in every bit of it,
    final conclusion:
    U ARE AN AMAZING WRITER.

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  2. umna khan29 August 2011 at 16:23

    Thank you, Thank you, Thank you :D
    well, i don't know why but i more like rhyming poems...

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  3. Anonymous29 August 2011 at 19:47

    Chaa gai Umna tum to! Like..totally! <3 :D

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  4. umna khan29 August 2011 at 20:16

    Thanks girl <3 :D

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  5. äмän ♥29 August 2011 at 21:01

    Lovely <3
    and Thanks for following :)
    Following you too. :)
    xx

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  6. umna khan29 August 2011 at 21:17

    Thank you :D

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