Monday 29 August 2011

gloom...nothing to bloom


Gloom, nothing to bloom,when mind so tensed,

when grudges so intense,



Depression,only aggression ,when it's so hard to breathe,

when frustration seethe,


Despair,nothing to repair,when dreams smashed,

when inner voice bashed,


Fright,nothing so bright,when hopes fell,

when thoughts pell-mell


Oh autumn of my heart, depart,let's get apart,let in the spring,

with a new swing,

6 comments:

  1. oh autumn of my heart, depart, lets get apart,let in the spring
    with a new swing


    u r good with rhymes,
    u r good with words,
    u add stuff like never read before,
    ur stuff glows bright with emotions in every bit of it,
    final conclusion:
    U ARE AN AMAZING WRITER.

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  2. Thank you, Thank you, Thank you :D
    well, i don't know why but i more like rhyming poems...

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  3. Chaa gai Umna tum to! Like..totally! <3 :D

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  4. Lovely <3
    and Thanks for following :)
    Following you too. :)
    xx

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